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    dots Submission Name: She Isdots
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    Author: iLLeGaL pLaYeR
    ASL Info:    23 / M / Malaysia
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 5/0/4
    Words: 137
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 551
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 818



    Description:
       A piece which was recently written for my girlfriend.


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    dotsShe Isdots
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    She is what I always seek in a girl,
    The one who speaks her mind and tell no lies,
    She is that special miracle,
    Who ease the pain that my heart cries.

    She is a blessing in disguised,
    God have answered my prayer after thousand of tries,
    She is the girl who changed my mind,
    Pessimist lover, I posses that no more in this soul of mine.

    She is the proof that wishes do come true,
    Euphoria, she always take me to,
    She is an Angel who escaped from heaven above,
    To sprinkle me with happiness, joy and love.

    She is the beloved Princess of my heart,
    Who made me smile from miles apart,
    She is a priceless diamond and a shining pearl,
    Maria Regina Marbella Butial is the name of this special girl.




    Submitted on 2008-01-29 08:33:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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