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Poetry /Being a Teen
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Sapphires enlace into ebony widowing me to the darkness
As I lie strangled beneath the weeds silencing my protest
Golden lights spear the sky displaying fight is essential
Your response however will thus measure your potential
Submitted on 2008-01-29 13:48:47
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