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    dots Submission Name: our only remnantdots
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    Author: DontLetGo421
    Elite Ratio:    2.18 - 118/238/141
    Words: 59
    Class/Type: Poetry/You left me
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    It's astounding to me.. I'm back where I've been
    Casting myself out there to soley obtain chagrin
    Yet you should have witnessed my gaze into your eyes
    It's bittersweet the words you said to me, such sweet lies
    My aroma amongst your car will be our only remnant
    In a manner the flaw is mine for granting the consent




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