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    dots Submission Name: Myself Towards Youdots
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    Author: justkillme08
    ASL Info:    18/F/MA
    Elite Ratio:    1.63 - 97/170/124
    Words: 61
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 616
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsMyself Towards Youdots
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    My eyes may not be the bluest,
    You have ever seen,
    My mind may not be the wisest,
    You'll ever meet,
    My heart may not be as whole,
    As it once used to be,
    But I see with thes eyes,
    And you're always on my mind,
    And maybe just maybe one day,
    Whats left of my heart will be only yours.




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