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    dots Submission Name: Summittingdots
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    Author: Amaterasu
    Elite Ratio:    1.4 - 0/2/16
    Words: 226
    Class/Type: Misc/Being a Teen
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    I heard the echo of your voice
    speak so cruel
    telling me to listen
    to their i stand
    hating every word
    cling my hand
    telling to respect you

    ha you made me laugh
    I feel the desire to curse and voilenly hurt you
    holding my anger
    tears wanting to drip
    i tell myself i won't summit
    but everyone tells me so
    no one on my side
    just cause your older
    doesn't mean anhting
    i care not you
    i don't want to know
    you walk in my life
    excepting thing
    when i except nothing
    i hate you
    as you hate me

    sharing the same room is a living hell
    see each other day is s tortument to death

    Just cuz i'm younger
    i'm told to summit
    told to act the better cuz
    i know better
    you're an adult acting like a child
    what idiot...
    i laugh to myself
    saying i won't
    but at the end
    those who once was mine
    now yours
    telling me to summit

    but i don'tcare just cuz i don't
    all i say them the same you
    to leave alone
    i hope to say a word or two not with you
    but at the i have to be the better one
    the one who ever one looks down cuz i'm the younger one




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