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    dots Submission Name: I Don't Have A Reasondots
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    Author: Raivn
    ASL Info:    33/f/al
    Elite Ratio:    4.28 - 1222/916/231
    Words: 224
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 625
    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    dotsI Don't Have A Reasondots
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    I don't have a reason to feel this way
    Other than it's a part of who I am
    I'm going to care even in those situations
    Where no one else would give a damn

    I don't have a reason to feel this way
    And I don't have a word with which I could explain
    I'm going to hurl myself into the abyss
    And take the good along with the pain

    I don't have a reason to feel this way
    But I've got a face to attribute it to
    I've got the image of your eyes in my mind
    And the smile that is uniquely you

    I don't have a reason to feel this way
    In fact, I've got a million why I won't
    But all those fly out the window in your presence
    And leave me wondering why you don't

    I don't have a reason to feel this way
    I don't have a way to make you see
    I don't have a reason to feel this way
    But I hope you feel the same about me




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    ||| Comments |||
      We all get this way from time to time right? Great write !! Thanks for sharing.
    Kelley Frost
    | Posted on 2008-04-16 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ]
      We all get this way from time to time right? Great write !! Thanks for sharing.
    Kelley Frost
    | Posted on 2008-04-16 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ]
      We all get this way from time to time right? Great write !! Thanks for sharing.
    Kelley Frost
    | Posted on 2008-04-16 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ]


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