I Can Remember -------------------------------------------
I can remember a time when nothing mattered
But the memories that we made
A time when rooms were filled with laughter
And we sat and watched the light fade
I can remember a time when things were better
And there was nothing to hold us back
We spent our time concerned with what we could give
Instead of what we would lack
I can remember a time when words were spoken
And photographs were taken
Smiles were fixed upon our faces
Before our world was shaken
I can remember a time when we were young
And rain always came from above
A time for hugs and tears of joy
And all you needed was love
I can remember a time before we were corrupted
Before hearts were broken
Before bonds were torn apart
By the things left unspoken
I can remember a time when nothing mattered
When life was brightened by her glow
A time when life wasn't taken for granted
These memories of long ago...
I didn't look at the description before reading this so it was kinda cool you got the point of losing someone and wishing you could still make memories with them. Although, I didn't immediatly see the connection between your grandma, I saw it almost like a wish for childhood again.
I like how this actually rhymed well, which I don't see all the time.
I like it, rarely ever do I enjoy rhymed pieces, mainly because they don't keep within a certian beat or rhythm, but I liked this. Good job.
pursuitoflife
Submission Name: I Can Remember
