i guess you could say this was influenced by a natasha trethewey piece? it's a little different than my regular, i know. i don't know what i think of this. obviously it's simple. i kind of like it, but i can see how it might not be good.
This is an amazing, succinct piece. I always thought it'd be sweet if newspapers printed a small poetry piece everyday, just like in the comics section, but I could never think of what kind of riding could be short and still have meaning, this is that piece.
Actually, I really like this and its simplicity. A captured moment with a bunch going on in the background. Waiting... waiting for something, something different, to change what is. At least to me, that is the feeling that I get from this.