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I'll Fly Away

Author: Raivn
ASL Info:    33/f/al
Elite Ratio:    4.28 - 1222 /916 /231
Words: 152
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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What's up with that?

I'll Fly Away

I'll fly away into the night
Find a place that resembles a home
I'll stumble upon a guiding light
And a love I can call my own

I'll fly away into the night
To a place where no one else can see
I'll find a way to make things right
And you'll love no-one but me

I'll fly away into the night
I'll close my eyes and wait
There's a place where no one has to fight
A blessed world that's free of hate

I'll fly away into the night
But somehow, they'll understand
We'll go so far beyond their sight
All you have to do is take my hand.

Submitted on 2008-01-29 20:38:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  i know that you placed this in the poetry category,
but ....
this could be a beautiful love song .... do you sing or play music yourself ? or do you know anyone that could put this to music?
if you do... then i urge you to try to persuade them.

| Posted on 2009-02-17 00:00:00 | by Alter idem | [ Reply to This ]

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