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    dots Submission Name: I'll Fly Awaydots
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    Author: Raivn
    ASL Info:    33/f/al
    Elite Ratio:    4.28 - 1222/916/231
    Words: 152
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsI'll Fly Awaydots
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    I'll fly away into the night
    Find a place that resembles a home
    I'll stumble upon a guiding light
    And a love I can call my own

    I'll fly away into the night
    To a place where no one else can see
    I'll find a way to make things right
    And you'll love no-one but me

    I'll fly away into the night
    I'll close my eyes and wait
    There's a place where no one has to fight
    A blessed world that's free of hate

    I'll fly away into the night
    But somehow, they'll understand
    We'll go so far beyond their sight
    All you have to do is take my hand.




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    ||| Comments |||
      i know that you placed this in the poetry category,
    but ....
    this could be a beautiful love song .... do you sing or play music yourself ? or do you know anyone that could put this to music?
    if you do... then i urge you to try to persuade them.

    J
    | Posted on 2009-02-17 00:00:00 | by Alter idem | [ Reply to This ]


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