Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • ES Magazine
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • Video Tutorials
  • RolePlay
  • 90% off Amazon
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: My Inconstant Moondots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: Raivn
    ASL Info:    25/f/al
    Elite Ratio:    4.28 - 1188/902/223
    Words: 131
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 102
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 785



    Description:
       thought about that line from Romeo and Juliet...

    "Oh swear not by the moon, the inconstant moon..."


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsMy Inconstant Moondots
    -------------------------------------------


    Just a tiny orb of light
    Up there in the sky
    Yet somehow, your crazy gravitational pull
    Makes me feel so high

    You rise up through the starry night
    And drag me to the sea
    I watch the waves crash on the shore
    And I feel your hold on me

    Just a tiny orb of light
    But an object of endless lore
    It demands my utter fascination
    And shakes me to my core

    You come and go in relentless cycles
    Always with an end and a beginning
    I watch you sail across the sky
    And forget the world is spinning

    But the night has come and gone
    And I hope to see you again soon
    You bathe the world in your silver light
    My inconstant moon
    -RDS-




    Submitted on 2008-01-29 20:41:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      you love the solar system. great piece. keep writing. check out my page
    | Posted on 2008-07-21 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]



    Full Anime Episodes Streaming Free
    5 million youtube videos all rated over 4.7 stars with 40+ ratings

    [ Copy this | Start New | Full Size ]

    Google
     

    [ Chrispian ] [ Write Forum ]
    [ Friends ] [ SNESroms ] .
    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry
    This user has been inactive for more than 5 days.