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    dots Submission Name: You Are My Everythingdots
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    Author: PrinceOfEvil666
    ASL Info:    16/M/tx
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 4/5/7
    Words: 56
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 1159
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 330



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       These are my vows to max. I think it makes a good short poem. I know the spelling might be off on some words but bear with me.


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    dotsYou Are My Everythingdots
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    You are my everthing
    I cannot live without you
    If you were to leave
    My very soul would die
    That is how much I love you
    You are the yin to my yang
    The light to my dark
    You have made the dark abyss
    Where my heart should have been
    Come alive
    You are my everything




    Submitted on 2008-01-29 21:11:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      So true Aaron, so true. You really do have a way with words, I must say that I'm flattered.
    | Posted on 2008-01-30 00:00:00 | by Max Million | [ Reply to This ]


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