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    dots Submission Name: The Sky That Didn't Existdots

    Author: Ayane
    ASL Info:    17/F/IL
    Elite Ratio:    2.75 - 71/128/60
    Words: 177
    Class/Type: Poetry/Broken
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    Average Vote:    4.0000
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       I actually wrote this after a dream I had. Then as I went along it actually kind of fit in with how my life was running right then so I kept going with it.

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    dotsThe Sky That Didn't Existdots

    I could feel the wind brush my eyelashes

    The grass moving uneasily beneath me

    A deep pulse began stronger inside the earth

    And there was just silence

    I couldn't help but wonder

    If this was the silence they talk about

    The kind that comes before a storm

    But I soon realized that something wasn't right

    All these soudns and feelings around me

    But where am I?

    Why this feeling of disconnection?

    I slowly opened my eyes

    And inhaled a breath I couldn't feel

    I surveyed the sky for the black clouds

    But saw nothing

    No clouds or rain

    No light or dark


    But I knew better than to be decieved

    There was no sky, but a mirror

    Surrounding me was nothing

    I was nothing

    I lifted my hand to prove my theory

    And saw nothing but a single raindrop

    Longing...Weeping for existence

    Suddenly, silence seemed so trivial

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