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    dots Submission Name: Feel so Baddots
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    Author: IEggman7
    ASL Info:    20/F/Ma
    Elite Ratio:    3.6 - 12/16/14
    Words: 148
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Betrayal
    Total Views: 86
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 840



    Description:
       The angst of crush, pathetically enough. Sometime, it just gets to me so much. So I just wrote it down in the hopes that it may flourish.


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    dotsFeel so Baddots
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    I saved up all my love for you
    hoping that you would always choose
    me, with the hope to never lose.
    It was so sad.

    When I dream of you and I
    I run along the seams and try
    to hold on to the threads that bind
    me and you. Stuck in my mind.

    Now I know just how you feel.
    Taking my heart to make a steal
    for emotions you never had.
    .....
    My racing heart will never win.
    I drank to all your deadly sins.
    Now I just feel so bad.

    When you linger far too long,
    I find I'm lost among
    all the bitter things you use to say.
    I prayed for you to stay away.

    I burn all of my open soars
    to heal me with the battle lore.
    Numb me down to my core.
    I never been so mad.




    Submitted on 2008-01-31 00:01:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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