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    dots Submission Name: Omniarchos (My Odyssey)dots
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    Author: Porcelaine
    ASL Info:    21/F/Croatia
    Elite Ratio:    3.82 - 850/653/234
    Words: 503
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsOmniarchos (My Odyssey)dots
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    ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

    I thrive in my ember lights,
    On this skin - the epitome of confusion
    And star-like adoration.
    It glows further…out onto ethereal moon prism,
    Where the night walks the trials of dark time eternity
    In the shade of it's lover on the pyre,
    Where the sand is wild and the fluorescent dewdrops
    Clutch to the ceilings of the sky in a quiet notion of life…
    It is where it takes me…
    Above the ruptured dynasties and crayon eyes,
    Where the dreams fall distant if I give them pain,
    Where the wounds gape numb if I strip their power.

    …My odyssey… I shiver tranquility
    And bathe in the pool of the galaxy as my thoughts evolve
    Into comeths, million miles away from home.
    They tell me wonders…
    I find love, so comforting, in the loneliest place,
    And the child I once was – chasing colors of the rainbow
    …Like nebulas… just as immersive, just as visceral.
    I find the shores of humanity so far from it's domain,
    I find touch and it almost makes me cry,
    I revel in the chaste emotion – innocence and ecstasy -
    So different and so alike.
    I remember now what it is to be alive

    I summon stars to my fingertips...and fall asleep smiling


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      Wow... It has been so long since I read your work, yet it is still beautiful as always...
    | Posted on 2008-03-17 00:00:00 | by Vampiric Death | [ Reply to This ]
      Celestial! -I like it.

    "Star-like adoration" and "crayon eyes" were two of the little phrases that made me grin. I love it when words can just come together like that and send your mind off into a another verse of inspiration...

    "I summon stars to my fingertips... and fall asleep smiling" just makes the perfect ending, too!
    It can be so hard to end a poem, I don't think most people realize the pressure that last line has in summing things up or getting to the point or reveal without being pedantic...

    So, great job all-around!!!

    -Ceyx
    | Posted on 2008-02-29 00:00:00 | by Ceyx | [ Reply to This ]



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