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    dots Submission Name: Undressing Diamondsdots
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    Author: Jared
    ASL Info:    21/M/Oregon
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 83/49/17
    Words: 120
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Passion
    Total Views: 92
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 837



    Description:
       The first song I've wrote for my band. The style is pretty hard, but there isn't a butt load of screaming, mostly singing. The structure or flow may sound off a bit when reading it like a poem, but it works well with the song.


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    dotsUndressing Diamondsdots
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    Alight, a picture show
    Of faces all alone
    Move aside the golden glow
    To realize I know

    My lust defines my heart
    A tempted, unsaved face
    Your grace sets you apart
    My jubilance wanes

    Delight my eyes
    With worthless dregs
    I won't hoard the lies
    You tell me

    Help me change
    I won't be afraid to rearrange
    And rip apart this flesh which won't see you
    Or bring the love that breaks us through

    When will the world accept
    Our works will die unknown
    What's saved up when we're swept
    Isn't evidence we've grown

    The lessons you don't learn
    Will tear you apart
    Decide your path, be stern
    Unfold a work of art




    Submitted on 2008-01-31 03:40:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I have nothing negative to say about this. This is actually very good. Works well with the song I am listening to (Bitch by Beseech).

    Mhm.
    | Posted on 2008-01-31 00:00:00 | by JenFlynn | [ Reply to This ]



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