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Submission Name:
Undressing Diamonds
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Author:
Jared
ASL Info:
21/M/Oregon
Elite Ratio:
8 - 83/49/17
Words:
120
Class/Type:
Lyrics/Passion
Total Views:
92
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The first song I've wrote for my band. The style is pretty hard, but there isn't a butt load of screaming, mostly singing. The structure or flow may sound off a bit when reading it like a poem, but it works well with the song.
Undressing Diamonds
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Alight, a picture show
Of faces all alone
Move aside the golden glow
To realize I know
My lust defines my heart
A tempted, unsaved face
Your grace sets you apart
My jubilance wanes
Delight my eyes
With worthless dregs
I won't hoard the lies
You tell me
Help me change
I won't be afraid to rearrange
And rip apart this flesh which won't see you
Or bring the love that breaks us through
When will the world accept
Our works will die unknown
What's saved up when we're swept
Isn't evidence we've grown
The lessons you don't learn
Will tear you apart
Decide your path, be stern
Unfold a work of art
Submitted on 2008-01-31 03:40:06
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I have nothing negative to say about this. This is actually very good. Works well with the song I am listening to (Bitch by Beseech).
Mhm.
| Posted on 2008-01-31 00:00:00 | by
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