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    dots Submission Name: WITH A WARNINGdots
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    Author: mekisha4ever
    ASL Info:    34yesplease69NV.
    Elite Ratio:    1.56 - 38/35/44
    Words: 154
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Longing
    Total Views: 138
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 887



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    dotsWITH A WARNINGdots
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    All I do is miss you
    all day along I think of you
    The longing in my heart
    holds me strong

    WITH A WARNING WITH A WARNING

    Then you sneak out of my life just the way you came in

    WITH A WARNING WITH A WARNING

    For ever you shine
    up in my black sky
    Down in my soul I wait
    for your warm embrace

    (Corus)
    WITH A WARNING WITH A WARNING

    Then you sneak out of my life just the way you came in

    WITH A WARNING WITH A WARNING

    You come in to my life
    for better or worst
    With all you give me
    you take it all back
    (Corus)
    WITH A WARNING WITH A WARNING

    Then you sneak out of my life just the way you came in

    WITH A WARNING WITH A WARNING







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