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    Author: thedemoninside
    Elite Ratio:    1.45 - 7/5/2
    Words: 20
    Class/Type: Poetry/Death
    Total Views: 96
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 143



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    Slowly....

    slowly i slit my wrist.
    slowly comes the pain.
    slowly comes death.
    and then slowly no more pain.




    Submitted on 2008-01-31 13:50:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      That was the most to the point poem I've read about cutting since 2004. And it is so simple and truthful. I hope you don't get the usual comments about how unoriginal this topic is. Although this isn't an original topic, this is the first poem written so truthfully. No fillers, no smart words, just the truth. Nice

    ~*~katara~*~
    | Posted on 2008-02-06 00:00:00 | by daughterofdeath | [ Reply to This ]
      it's simply NICE !!

    Welcome to ES...
    | Posted on 2008-02-04 00:00:00 | by Dying Young | [ Reply to This ]
      As Eliza said it was simple, but it was easy to visualize. It was a obviously a piece that had a lot of emotion tied to it. Keep up the good work.

    | Posted on 2008-01-31 00:00:00 | by BeautifulSoul | [ Reply to This ]
      This is a very simple and short piece, but very easy to visualise. I could see the images in my mind, and I liked that a lot.

    Welcome to ES, and best of luck to you.

    Eliza
    | Posted on 2008-01-31 00:00:00 | by Piper | [ Reply to This ]



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