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    dots Submission Name: Faithdots
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    Author: awastedsky
    Elite Ratio:    5.51 - 103/119/79
    Words: 97
    Class/Type: Poetry/What is
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    Description:
       More than a coincidence.


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    dotsFaithdots
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    Did you know
    life
    is written scrolls
    and we're all players
    for parts untold
    and it's our job
    to unfold
    a future
    only we are able to show?

    Faith isn't surrendering your power to ignorance
    and a false sense of security.

    Faith is acceptance of the idea that
    this is more than a coincidence.

    I am as skilled as you allow yourself to believe I am.
    I carry as much knowledge as you believe you lack.
    I impress because you give me that ability.

    I am more than you know.




    Submitted on 2008-01-31 20:10:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      The last comment was very cheesy,but this is a really good poem...

    "I am as skilled as you allow yourself to believe I am.
    I carry as much knowledge as you believe you lack."

    Id cut out these lines to make it perfect though,whatever you want...

    | Posted on 2008-09-30 00:00:00 | by Raphael | [ Reply to This ]
      I have faith in you.
    | Posted on 2008-01-31 00:00:00 | by Glen Bowman | [ Reply to This ]
      Huh. One question:

    I am as skilled as you allow yourself to believe I am.
    I carry as much knowledge as you believe you lack.
    I impress because you give me that ability.


    Who do you convince in this idea? I feel that absolutely no one can take this into consideration because your stance is just... faltering. There's this lack of sincerity in it, not because of the switches between you and and the irony of it, but because it's just not a natural process for anyone. No, you can't have other people make the assumption you act as it. That's being easily influenced and not acting as yourself.

    There's an issue with self-esteem here. Hm.
    | Posted on 2008-01-31 00:00:00 | by JenFlynn | [ Reply to This ]


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