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    dots Submission Name: insomniadots
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    Author: Maverique
    ASL Info:    25/F/Own little world
    Elite Ratio:    3.27 - 438/478/128
    Words: 26
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsinsomniadots
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    I salt my pillow with tears
    as unrelenting memories pepper a lonely ceiling





    It's a private theatre for sleepless eyes.




    Submitted on 2008-02-01 02:46:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      ...maybe you should try other condiments. like vinaigrette. or tomato relish. or...

    i'm just joking.

    you say a lot in few words. turning into a minimalist, are we?

    sad. and very lonely.
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    | Posted on 2008-02-02 00:00:00 | by silent strings | [ Reply to This ]
      these few, unadorned, stark lines capture a whole world of misery and suffering that we all have to go through. I could definitely identify with this, and you put it very well, straight to the point.
    | Posted on 2008-02-01 00:00:00 | by marigold | [ Reply to This ]


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