I don't know if this is some weird pychic powers we have, but our poetry is so close to each other, it's like we share a mind. Well, great minds think a like.
Your poem is really well written as a whole. I really love the first stanza, it just grabs my attention. I think I love your poetry because it's like a song on the radio, if you can relate to it, most likely you will end up liking it. Since I relate to you poetry so much, that makes me keep coming back to read more.
But your right, there is no use wasting you time on someone who isn't worth your time.
Forget how that little boy made you feel
Fade away what you thought was once true
Because a love like yours could never seal
He's nothing else than a bitter fool
A person like yourself is and always strong
Look beyond your hatred hurt and pain
You will no longer be the one wronged
Ignore him and you'll drive him insane
But revenge and hateful words that pierce
Are not your answers to get over him
Being the better person is what makes you fierce
It's who you become and how you live
that was very deep, my young friend. there is so much for you to look forward to. you shouldn't allow one person, one [censored], to decide the direction of your life. you have the choice of what you will do with your life. only you have that decision, not someone else. not someone that has hurt you so.
but your writing is very good, very enriching. i could feel what you feel. and i could see what i think you wanted me to see. i like this write :)
Submission Name: Wasting Myself on You
