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    dots Submission Name: Sunrisedots

    Author: Flynn
    ASL Info:    24/M/MI
    Elite Ratio:    3.77 - 74/123/48
    Words: 197
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Serious
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    Average Vote:    5.0000
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       Random thoughts about my situation.

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    And when she holds you, it is as if you have ascended to heaven, even if only for a period of 7 seconds.

    It is a sunrise, brief and beautiful, and it burns forever into your heart.

    Whether this is a pain or a joy is entirely up to how selfish you are.

    It is for me a joy.

    When she is smiling and her eyes are aglow, and the fire in her chest burns more brightly that any star in the midnight sky, even when it's cause is not you...

    It is for me a joy.

    For the deepest sort of love does not always involve a tender kissing moment or a passionate night spent together. Rather, it is when you can say from the bottom of your heart that you are sorry, and she will hold you close and say-

    Me too.

    It is for me a joy.

    Because the sun always rises, even after the darkest night. It is a not a matter of if, but when. And is up to you, to me, and to her to see that.

    The sun always rises.

    Submitted on 2008-02-01 16:53:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This was great! I can completely relate with it - though I am a girl. Making people happy... living in the moment with them... It's like hearing the first few notes of your favorite song. Shivers envelope your body as you close your eyes to listen. A smile splashes across your lips and your entire being hums with complete and utter joy. It's great feeling.
    | Posted on 2008-03-22 00:00:00 | by laffeytaffey | [ Reply to This ]
      pretty. and full of longing. and... sighful, if that makes sense.

    and all very true.
    | Posted on 2008-02-02 00:00:00 | by silent strings | [ Reply to This ]

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