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    dots Submission Name: like an island in this placedots
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    Author: blackbird
    ASL Info:    31/male/reykjavik iceland
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 194/328/300
    Words: 90
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotslike an island in this placedots
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    clothe me not
    in the vital blood
    of lovers.
    every word
    is my escape from others.

    pale not
    the skin of my endearment
    for i have breathed
    only to pass the time
    & to know what fear meant.

    i've found a cage
    for all my songs
    amongst the thick
    of concrete
    & throngs

    of knowing glances
    where the heart goes.
    & love,
    instead of deleting,
    grows

    like the trees
    of my being
    where i'm always seeing
    my own face
    like an island in this place.




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