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    dots Submission Name: the suns of my undoingdots
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    Author: blackbird
    ASL Info:    31/male/reykjavik iceland
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 194/328/300
    Words: 83
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 409
    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    dotsthe suns of my undoingdots
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    spin inside me,
    suns of my my undoing.
    settle gently
    in my heart tonight.

    in the open air
    i'm a closed mystery.
    i see the ceiling of the world
    & i wish the oceans' swallow
    to be swift.

    my hands move
    & i can barely count.
    the offspring of time
    are telling me to go.

    move onward
    hollow heart.
    & in the forests of retreat,
    become me.

    i've lasted this long.
    where do all the miracles go?




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