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    dots Submission Name: Ashley to Ashes....We All Fall Downdots
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    Author: enigmaticone
    ASL Info:    22/m/nh
    Elite Ratio:    2.93 - 16/36/24
    Words: 73
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 157
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 595



    Description:
       An idea I have been playing with for awhile. Very personal poem about problems with a certain person (ie. see title). A little play on words to make it interesting. Hope you enjoy


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    dotsAshley to Ashes....We All Fall Downdots
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    Pocket full of posies
    Stench full of death
    Long skeletal fingers
    Clasped around my neck
    Tumultuous unrest
    Fervent ambitions
    Futile quest
    Morose songs fill the air
    Behind your eyes
    Vacant stare
    Ring around the rosary
    For a God that doesnt care
    Erroneously injust
    Heedlessly follow
    Blindly trust
    Ashes to ashes
    Dust to dust
    Seering embrace
    Sanity lost
    Without a trace
    Into the hellfires
    Destined to drown
    Ashes to ashes
    We all fall down




    Submitted on 2008-02-02 00:57:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      ahh, the misery of unrequited love will always ring true... it has for me, and it has for countless billions who've inhabited this planet.

    it's a nice play on words. you probably know that the original nursery rhyme was about the black death, right? so, it fits quite well.

    anyway, just a quick comment really.
    ~
    | Posted on 2008-02-03 00:00:00 | by silent strings | [ Reply to This ]



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