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" Death, Dear Death " Calling out at last breath " was it meant to have given birth " " on this Dear Sweet Earth " " Or was it a mistake? " " was it a mistake to take " " place in this world? " " tell me, or I will never be told " " on my knees I beg you to say " " please please , oh if you may " " my heart aches to the thought " " of who people fought " " about what reason any has to live " " should any drop of the cliff? " " Death Dear Death " whom I call with my last breath take my soul to the place of rest take it , and take care of it to the best |
Oh wow. This is so fantastically written and deep. Ive felt like that so many times before that I can feel every word inside me like my own. Especially the line " about what reason any has to live " That question never has an answer I fear. Great write -Safire | Posted on 2008-02-03 00:00:00 | by girly101 | [ Reply to This ] | i'm feeling the same way lately. thanks for the write... | | Posted on 2008-02-02 00:00:00 | by blackbird | [ Reply to This ] | |