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Submission Name:
I Want to Be
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Author:
skinnard
ASL Info:
22 male New York
Elite Ratio:
2.17 - 38/76/49
Words:
299
Class/Type:
Poetry/Love
Total Views:
86
Average Vote:
3.0000
Bytes:
1818
Description:
I Want to Be
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I want to be your last love
Be your shining star
I want to be the one you turn to
When the rest of your world falls apart
I want to be your guard of safety
Your knight in golden armor
Willing to be the one here waiting
And be everything you're not
So we can complete the equation
I want to be your lips desire
The other half of your heart
Your love with burning fire
Healing to all of your scars
I would travel the ends of the world
To see you smile once more
I want to be your rainbow after the rain
Be your one and only
The sun to make your clouds go away
I want to be the one you call
When even the littlest of things go wrong
The one you cant sleep without saying good night to
Your thought behind every love song
I want to be your fairy tale ending
The genii for all of your wishes
Sandman to make all of your dreams come true
And reciever of all of your kisses
I want to be your teddy bear
That you cuddle with when you sleep
The sweetness to all of your dreams
The only one that you need
So take me by my hand
And dance with me tonight
Forget about the world
And feel what we know is right
Words can never describe
The feelings inside I have for you
No more reason to hide
I want to be the one to hear you say
"I Love You too"
Submitted on 2008-02-02 14:03:08
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nice point u gettin across good work try to think a little smaller
~*jackie*~
| Posted on 2008-02-02 00:00:00 | by
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this is a cute message, very loving but i feel like the rhythm was off and it was too long. but its a cute poem. joanna
| Posted on 2008-02-02 00:00:00 | by
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It was heartfelt and I enjoyed it, but I felt like it could have used a little bit more rhythm when being read, try to cut down some of those longer lines maybe.
| Posted on 2008-02-02 00:00:00 | by
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