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    dots Submission Name: I Want to Bedots
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    Author: skinnard
    ASL Info:    22 male New York
    Elite Ratio:    2.17 - 38/76/49
    Words: 299
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 610
    Average Vote:    3.0000
    Bytes: 1818



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    dotsI Want to Bedots
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    I want to be your last love

    Be your shining star

    I want to be the one you turn to

    When the rest of your world falls apart

    I want to be your guard of safety

    Your knight in golden armor

    Willing to be the one here waiting

    And be everything you're not

    So we can complete the equation

    I want to be your lips desire

    The other half of your heart

    Your love with burning fire

    Healing to all of your scars

    I would travel the ends of the world

    To see you smile once more

    I want to be your rainbow after the rain

    Be your one and only

    The sun to make your clouds go away

    I want to be the one you call

    When even the littlest of things go wrong

    The one you cant sleep without saying good night to

    Your thought behind every love song

    I want to be your fairy tale ending

    The genii for all of your wishes

    Sandman to make all of your dreams come true

    And reciever of all of your kisses

    I want to be your teddy bear

    That you cuddle with when you sleep

    The sweetness to all of your dreams

    The only one that you need

    So take me by my hand

    And dance with me tonight

    Forget about the world

    And feel what we know is right

    Words can never describe

    The feelings inside I have for you

    No more reason to hide

    I want to be the one to hear you say

    "I Love You too"




    Submitted on 2008-02-02 14:03:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      nice point u gettin across good work try to think a little smaller
    ~*jackie*~
    | Posted on 2008-02-02 00:00:00 | by lovemachine | [ Reply to This ]
      this is a cute message, very loving but i feel like the rhythm was off and it was too long. but its a cute poem. joanna
    | Posted on 2008-02-02 00:00:00 | by heartless_ | [ Reply to This ]
      It was heartfelt and I enjoyed it, but I felt like it could have used a little bit more rhythm when being read, try to cut down some of those longer lines maybe.
    | Posted on 2008-02-02 00:00:00 | by Jordan Arema | [ Reply to This ]


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