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    dots Submission Name: Namesake Lilithdots
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    Author: Morsketch
    ASL Info:    21/F/TX
    Elite Ratio:    3.6 - 27/26/26
    Words: 169
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 722
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1394



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       This actually has nothing to do with what I started writing about. This actually has nothing to do with anything. I don't even really know why I'm posting it. Variety, I guess?


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    dotsNamesake Lilithdots
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    Take down the evil,
    Lying whore,
    Tonight’s the night,
    Prepare for war!

    He’s ruined our lands,
    Broken our spine,
    Tonight comes Death,
    To take our minds!


    Thief of soul,
    And dearest time,
    She’s stolen us
    From our own kind!

    Murdered our husbands,
    Sullied our wives,
    This Man of the Dark,
    Shall end our lives!


    Hearten, brothers,
    Our numbers dwindle.
    She cannot win,
    A fire we’ll kindle!

    Sisters in faith,
    The Devil nears,
    Though few remain,
    We must not fear!


    The last we are,
    You and I,
    We must succeed,
    The Bitch will die.

    Dearest friend,
    He’s not yet won,
    I’ll see his blood,
    Before I’m done.


    Now we battle,
    One on one,
    But in the end,
    What will become…

    ...Of our race,
    For we are all,
    That has endured,
    This evil trial...




    Damnit Lil,
    The war is done.
    NOW will you agree
    To have my son?




    Submitted on 2008-02-02 18:17:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Ok, yeah a little out there, but good for being about nothing... : ) smiley faces!

    Duv
    | Posted on 2008-02-02 00:00:00 | by Draumrkopa | [ Reply to This ]


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