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    dots Submission Name: Encouragedots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 92
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       "Who then recovers. Say thou art mine, and ever My Love, as it begins, shall so persevere." William Shakespeare, All's Well That Ends Well



    Quick release of words before I hit yet another temporary agency. In these days when I have given of all I have & I must then be the recipient, I am most thankful for my beloved family/friends. Lessons I must learn if I am to continue my missionary work; the true meaning of giving and of receiving.

    Still, any positive prayers & karma for work would be most graciously appreciated!

    Love, Peace, Joy, Hope, Faith!!!


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    dotsEncouragedots
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    Patience my child
    though debts may be piled
    in this you are not alone;
    For always in soul "IT" is known:
    The wise are not worldly, the worldly not wise...
    Faith is a free ticket, not something one buys.
    Cherish true freedom in Love,
    sink not to depths, float above.
    For some days it may seem,
    life more nightmare than dream.
    Trust in virtue and in Faith,
    not harsh words the public saith.
    Keep in motion the wheel of your dreams,
    From the Love of me the light within you gleams!




    Submitted on 2004-06-28 09:45:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    Just had to throw that in...thanks for the great write my dear...

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    Doop-dee-dooooo...how are yooooooo????
    You are coooooooollllll
    Annnnnnnd you ruuuuuulllllllllle!
    | Posted on 2005-04-08 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]
      tiffany...tifffannnneeeee...tiffannnnnnnnnnneeeeeeeeeeee! This is the most inspirational poem I have probably ever read. You just make it all make sense, ya know. Thanks for that. Have a good one and keep smilin'
    | Posted on 2005-04-08 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]
      this is a very encouraging poem. this poem had a nice rhythm, and got me to think about where im headin, and about my philosophy. it's to have your own piece, to forget about the crude world and put your mind on yourself for once. this was a nice read
    ~jess
    | Posted on 2004-10-26 00:00:00 | by nameless child | [ Reply to This ]
      I'm actually starting to feel weird for complimenting so many poems today. I'm normally alot more negative. Bah, anyway, excellent write. You've managed to weave suttle but beautiful rhythm through the piece.

    ~James "Alexian" Neal
    http://www.alexiansaga.com
    | Posted on 2004-06-28 00:00:00 | by alexianx | [ Reply to This ]


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