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    dots Submission Name: Catherinedots
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    Author: Piper
    ASL Info:    17/ Female/ Europe
    Elite Ratio:    2.78 - 31/41/27
    Words: 170
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 101
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1096



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    dotsCatherinedots
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    There once used to be a girl,
    Catherine was her name,
    And she fell in love with a man,
    Who thought the life was a game.

    Cathy did everything she could
    Just to get some of his attention,
    She laughed, she cried, she bled,
    Trying to get a bit of his affection.

    One day he anounced he was leaving
    Catherine put on a great act
    That she was a cold-hearted bitch,
    But she wasn't, that's a fact.

    And as he was slowly packing,
    Catherine knocked on his door,
    He opened and she kissed him,
    His papers scattered on the floor.

    He said he would return,
    Catherine promised to wait,
    And the years have passed,
    She still has strong faith.

    That he will return
    To the place they once held dear
    To the place where tragedies happened,
    And now it's just a lair of fear.

    Ten years after, Catherine's still the same
    Waiting for her man,
    Who thinks that love is a game.




    Submitted on 2008-02-03 09:16:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Excellent, I loved it, great message, really kept me interested. There was one typo in the first stanza you wrote the and i think you meant that, but other than that it was great!
    | Posted on 2008-02-03 00:00:00 | by Jordan Arema | [ Reply to This ]



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