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    dots Submission Name: soileddots
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    Author: bas
    ASL Info:    24/f/somewhere...
    Elite Ratio:    4.94 - 42/48/35
    Words: 84
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Who treads upon this darkened path
    of scattered dreams
    and passion lost

    Who dares look past this shattered face
    a frail mind
    a taunted heart

    Who stands to strip the heavy sheath
    of blood cursed
    of love and death

    Who longs to touch this tainted flesh
    the body fouled
    the soul chained

    Who stops to kiss these broken lips
    like a gentle breeze
    embrace these sins

    Who finds me lost inside this cage
    leaves me
    sunken in my destiny




    Submitted on 2008-02-03 17:02:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      i think it quite interesting that the last part reads more like a statement than a question.
    kinda adds a nice twist.
    hmmm...not quite sure if i can decide if these are questions whispered to some great unknown or questions asked of the answer or rhetorical...
    also could be read with religious undertones...
    interesting. i like that.
    nice.

    sorry for the un-help.
    | Posted on 2008-02-05 00:00:00 | by eno1 | [ Reply to This ]



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