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    dots Submission Name: Dear Asshole (Long Overdue)dots
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    Author: AnnaBullen707
    ASL Info:    14/Female/USA
    Elite Ratio:    1.92 - 16/48/48
    Words: 141
    Class/Type: Poetry/I hate you
    Total Views: 113
    Average Vote:    3.0000
    Bytes: 821



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    dotsDear Asshole (Long Overdue)dots
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    Youre an asshole and you hurt me
    Claim youre true and then desert me?
    Liar, cheater, and through all my trust!
    Youre a jerk and you dont deserve me

    Youre a pretender and Im through this
    Youre an idiot, and so useless!
    You brag about how to treat a girl
    And I laugh cus youre so clueless!

    They ask and now I can explain
    Why you cheating hasnt seemed to cause me much pain
    The truth is your dick just couldnt compete
    With all the guys that can turn on their brain

    Now Im almost done so before I drone it
    I should remind you -- Im too gorgeous for you and I know it
    But years from now when you’re stuck with that cow
    You’re really gonna wish ya hadn’t blown it :)







    Submitted on 2008-02-03 18:51:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Well, I enjoyed reading this poem, because I was hurt by those pricks that call themselves men a lot of times, so I could really relate to it.
    There are some typos, but never mind that, the poem itself is nice.

    Keep on writing, and best of luck.

    Eliza
    | Posted on 2008-02-04 00:00:00 | by Piper | [ Reply to This ]
      there were a few spell errors but none the less it was a some what heart felt writing that got my attention. look for my writings and write me back, I'd like to talk with you but It's your choice. But know this not all guys are like that.
    | Posted on 2008-02-04 00:00:00 | by shadow of death | [ Reply to This ]
      Seemed a little elementary, it reminded me of lyrics to some girly pop rock star song. And there are a couple of spelling mistakes.
    | Posted on 2008-02-03 00:00:00 | by Jordan Arema | [ Reply to This ]



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