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    dots Submission Name: Lost Flower [poem about the black dahlia murder]dots
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    Author: hateyourlove
    ASL Info:    15/f/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    2.45 - 19/14/14
    Words: 240
    Class/Type: Poetry/Death
    Total Views: 233
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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       Black Dahlia Murder


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    dotsLost Flower [poem about the black dahlia murder]dots
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    A sunny morning, crossing the street,
    not expecting to see.
    Oh goodness! Oh my!
    This can’t be.

    A young woman,
    the fresh age of twenty two,
    lay crumpled on the ground,
    in a tangle or two.

    Her hair so dark,
    her lips so red,
    her skin so pale,
    you’d swear she was dead!

    As I ventured near I let out a gasp.
    In shock I let out a sharp cry.
    I realized what had happened
    and asked myself why.

    I ran with great speed.
    I said my goodbye.
    I ran to that telephone booth,
    with my head to the sky.

    I picked up that phone.
    I dialled that number.
    I made up a lie,
    so they wouldn’t wonder.

    When the police arrived
    I watched with a shiver.
    I won’t let them know it was I who called,
    I thought with a quiver.

    The coroner came in and his analysis was final.
    He reported, “Cut ear to ear
    and severed down the middle.”
    I couldn’t believe what I was to hear.




    I looked at the girl, this lost flower.
    I looked for a while.
    It was true. It was all true,
    her face was now an everlasting red smile.

    Tears rolled down for the dahlia of black.
    I cursed the savage fiend that did this to eternal damnation.
    Then I turned to remove myself,
    from this saddening desperation.




    Submitted on 2008-02-03 21:41:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Hmmm. I never really knew what the black dahlia thingy was about. Uh, at the beginning this poem had a really nice flow, but it seemed to lose it near the end. However, i thought that it was a great read.

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    | Posted on 2008-02-04 00:00:00 | by Draumrkopa | [ Reply to This ]



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