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    dots Submission Name: Where one ends and the other beginsdots
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    Author: hateyourlove
    ASL Info:    15/f/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    2.45 - 19/14/14
    Words: 80
    Class/Type: Poetry/Death
    Total Views: 142
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 535



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    dotsWhere one ends and the other beginsdots
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    The boundaries which divide life from death
    are at best shadowy and vague.
    Who shall say where one ends,
    and the other begins?

    This world holds us in.
    What would we be without it?
    What are we with it?

    It all seems so fake.
    Our words,
    mere paper roses.
    Our truths,
    unforgivable thorns,
    which cut when they reach the surface
    of our hopeless flesh.

    Where one starts and the other begins...
    Is that our flaw?




    Submitted on 2008-02-03 21:42:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow. I really liked this one. This is something that I've thought about for a long time. How our lives pretty much mean nothing, that we are just ants trapped on this earth, forced to live and die, a repetitive cycle. I loved this.

    Duv

    O.Y. I think that a great title for this one would be Where One Starts And The Other Begins
    | Posted on 2008-02-04 00:00:00 | by Draumrkopa | [ Reply to This ]



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