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    dots Submission Name: Part 5: Nightmaresdots
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    Author: faded color
    ASL Info:    18/M/That one place
    Elite Ratio:    2.93 - 36/32/37
    Words: 242
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Part 5: Nightmares

    “So what about Sam?” I asked nervously.
    “We think she’ll recover, eventually. There was something we noticed that I was wandering about however.”
    “What’s that?” I asked.
    “Did you know she is pregnant?”
    “Oh my god, are you serious?” I asked excitedly.
    “This is perfect.” That antagonizing voice murmured.
    Somewhat scared me, the way it was said was as if it was expecting this.
    “So how did you know?” I asked nervously to the image in my head.
    “Simple, insignificant boy, any time you enter someone else’s body, as do I. As a direct result, a part of you entered her, so did I to become what is now in her belly. I need a host to continue. No host, no me. But I also know your family’s soul desire is to keep going with males.”
    “Why would you only say males? I would gladly be a father to a little boy and girl.”
    “My only flaw is that I cannot corrupt the true heart of a woman. Men are lustful, tempting in pleasure of any kind, and easily manipulated. Their will is weak.” It argued.
    I must find a way to stop this thing if my son is to survive a normal life. I do not want him or any of his children fighting this thing without a good way to win. I especially don’t want him to see what I have seen.




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