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    dots Submission Name: Tieddots
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    Author: Billy Budd
    Elite Ratio:    1.11 - 0/2/11
    Words: 167
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 533
    Average Vote:    1.0000
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    Tied



    Its confusing, like a Stephen King novel
    But I知 still turning the pages
    Trying to act like a narcissistic rebel
    I知 such a rebel, I live life in stages
    My insides screaming, my inner beast rages
    My brain, trying to hurt me, scheming
    Like only it can

    I知 tied to this life
    Just like the runaway bride
    Just like north south divide
    Just like the immortal who died


    I知 losing, like the English education system
    But I知 still turning up
    I知 not one to condemn
    I知 going to take it too hell with me
    My outsides dying, my outer beast is with me
    My legs, trying to kill me, running
    Like only I can

    I知 tied to this life
    Just like the runaway bride
    Just like north south divide
    Just like the immortal who died

    I知 tied to this life
    Just like the runaway bride
    Just like north south divide
    Just like the immortal who died




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