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    dots Submission Name: to Daniel Zapata Jr.: this is not a threatdots
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    Author: Thief
    ASL Info:    22/male/plainview
    Elite Ratio:    4.8 - 180/80/69
    Words: 123
    Class/Type: Misc/Serious
    Total Views: 779
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    Bytes: 707



    Description:
       oh, how my plans layout over eachother and just for the taste of revenge, and of course to end so much bullshit he throws at me.

    ...this is part of that plan.
    ...this is part of a new me.
    no longer that weak kid!


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    dotsto Daniel Zapata Jr.: this is not a threatdots
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    you go ahead and hate me all you want,
    you can tell your lies to anyone,
    but in the end all will see the truth,
    and i'll even do it without a gun(unlike you)
    see, you'll never understand
    that i will ALWAYS be stronger than you!
    it no longer matters to me what you say or do.
    i'll get my own revenge and slip past your cop friends
    i'll do it, oh yes i will, even if it means i'll be dead
    i don't care how this ends, but it will damn it!!
    heh, i can already see you throwing your damn fit!
    this is not a threat, just a small note,
    this way, you don't look like an idiot and didn't know




    Submitted on 2008-02-04 11:25:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Hmm. What is this about?
    It sounds like this person poassibly betrayed you and you are planning to seek revenge. Revenge without mundane weapons, just plain strength.
    But revenge for what?
    | Posted on 2010-09-18 00:00:00 | by girly101 | [ Reply to This ]
      are you just leaving angsty messages up here or what?

    if so,what for? its sad...

    -Craig
    | Posted on 2008-11-19 00:00:00 | by Raphael | [ Reply to This ]


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