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    dots Submission Name: Link to realitydots
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    Author: insanegemini
    ASL Info:    18/f/tx
    Elite Ratio:    2.33 - 24/50/56
    Words: 120
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
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    dotsLink to realitydots
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    Memories are funny things
    They chain you to those loved
    And remind us why some links
    Remain broken

    They are like ghostly spectrums
    Some are bright and vivid
    Other are so faint one must strain to see them

    Why is that so?
    Why do we have reminiscences of the past?
    That are indestructible
    But then there are those that seem almost fictional

    Perhaps all memories are false
    There is no past
    Only a future

    Those thought we are convinced in
    Are merely images our mind wishes happened
    And tricks us in to believing they did

    Maybe everything we know is a lie
    Everything that happened…
    Didn’t




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      ok, just the thought of that is scary! living a lie you whole life? wierd! but this was a great piece... gets the mind working!
    | Posted on 2008-02-05 00:00:00 | by Kaygrl | [ Reply to This ]
      creepy. when u get memories and fiction mixed up and u cant tell the difference..


    nice

    rip n rot
    grim
    | Posted on 2008-02-04 00:00:00 | by DaGrimReaperess | [ Reply to This ]


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