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    Author: Jester_Gesture
    ASL Info:    20/f/WA or IL
    Elite Ratio:    3.43 - 354/433/185
    Words: 96
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 104
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    When all the phrases of love
    stop echoing in my heart's walls
    I lay down on the highway of memory
    and miss you
    without ceasing, with wild abandon,
    as books I've read and places I've been
    whisk past me on the asphalt.
    The hurts I've felt
    pass the smiles I've given
    flashing their headlights into my eyes
    and running over my arms
    and when
    the horns are cut off, when
    the sirens fade away with my body
    my soul is still stretched out there
    waiting, saying,
    I miss you
    without ceasing, with wild abandon.




    Submitted on 2008-02-04 12:18:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I love this highway, I love the imagery.
    Theres nothing more to say
    | Posted on 2008-02-04 00:00:00 | by MC white | [ Reply to This ]


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