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    dots Submission Name: All the Timesdots
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    ASL Info:    24/F
    Elite Ratio:    2.84 - 22/20/25
    Words: 124
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Talking backwards to my brain
    Ordering myself to free this pain
    Stepping out of the windy rain
    Scrubbing clean the old remains


    Making sure the train is on time
    Thinking I must have lost my mind
    Saying to myself that this is not a crime
    Wishing that I could find a sign


    Taking my sweet time to decide
    Wondering about this long ride
    Blinking thoughts away from my insides
    Changing with the tides


    Kissing some sweet guy
    Feeling hands moving up my thighs
    Seeing a being reach down and hide
    Thinking of all the times


    Thinking of all the times I cried
    Remembering all of the times I tried
    Twitching to the whys
    Considering these goodbyes




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