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    dots Submission Name: Semantics and Seperationdots
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    Author: brokenmuse
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    I am so sick of the semantics which divide us all and keep us down. So many words there are that are so hurtful. We are all one, in truth. We are all old and wise and timeless and beautiful. But so many people get so caought up in the physical aspect of things, so many many people.

    We all need to >transcend< the ego.We are all a part of a greater whole. Until we give into this, we just cause more grief and suffering and strife for ourselves. War is so bad. We need peace. We need understanding and love and positivity and acceptance.

    Peace and love. War keeps us small and seperate but peace and love help us grow. Did you know that over 600,000 people have died so far in the "War on Terror", and the draft is being considered as an option to drum up more troops.

    There is physical and documented visual evidence that the government was behind 9/11. A tool used to divide and conquer. We need to stand together people. We need to say "No, more killing is not going to stop the killing", we need to forgive and forget, to turn the other cheek.

    We need to stand for human rights. The right to freedom and love and happiness and the supply of our basic needs. We need to conserve our precious rescources, care for the earth that has cared for us. Stop letting the semantics get in the way.

    There is no good and evil, there is service to self vs. service to others, but good and evil, no. And in service to others we also gain. So help out the man who needs a few dollars for gas. Give your waitress a good tip. Wave hi to a stranger.

    We all make our own reality, so make a beautiful reality, because we all have equal control over the reality of the world. If not for you, do it for the children you have, or will have. Do you want your kids to live in a world of no fresh water with a continent sized amount of garbage poisoning what life there is in the oceans as the world wages war across the entirety of it's face to poison the land as well?

    We all deserve peace and love and joy, so we need to create it for ourself. In the end, all you need is love, and the love you take is equal to the love you make, so make lots of love.

    We all need to work together to make a better tomorrow, not just for ourselves, but for the world, for the ones we love, for the ones we have never met, for the family we know and the family we don't. For everyone on the earth today is brother and sister. And family should be there for one another.

    Sorry for the rant, but division and strife is >not< the way. Peace and love are the path. Should we choose to follow it.

    So peace, and you know I love you.




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      This is a definite fav. I find this carefully well-thought off and i like the fact that it was expressed quite detailed and i understood the message of it all although i had to look up the meaning of 'semantics'. lol.

    "We all make our own reality, so make a beautiful reality" i like this part.

    ".....and the family we don't." I like this part too. Unconditional love to all- the ones we know and don't.

    "Peace and love are the path. Should we choose to follow it.

    So peace, and you know I love you."

    - This part is smart if you get what i mean (:


    | Posted on 2008-03-14 00:00:00 | by rosesrouges | [ Reply to This ]
      Amanda,

    I agree with you on the fact that in sharing and understanding we grow while fighting just keeps us small; small minded and small spirited.

    I'm not sure I agree that there is no good or evil. I think we are all both. It's part of the human condition. But, We can control what we make of it and how we react to people. Kindness generally promotes kindness in others and so it begins and goes on.

    War in general is just propaganda by those who crave power or a change in power, and life becomes a commodity rather than a precious gift.

    (((Hugs))) and Flowers and a Happy Random Act Of Kindness kind of day to you.

    Jan
    | Posted on 2008-03-11 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]


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