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    dots Submission Name: The End Is Neardots
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    Author: BlueTorcher
    Elite Ratio:    4.67 - 79/97/96
    Words: 90
    Class/Type: Poetry/Legend
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    Description:
       Everyone thinks of the world ending,here is my version.Enjoy!


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    dotsThe End Is Neardots
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    The world is ending
    Collapsing,before my face
    Lives returnng to dust

    We are all beng erased
    The sky trembles
    The earth shudders

    As a baby cries
    For its mother

    Life is over
    Time has stopped
    No longer a need for a clock

    The trees fall
    The clouds freeze
    As the seas dry up

    A woman shrieks
    Fearing the end
    Wishing for life

    As we fall into oblivion
    The end is near
    As we accept our fate

    We slowly become erased




    Submitted on 2008-02-04 19:43:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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