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    dots Submission Name: Waitingdots
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    Author: BlueTorcher
    Elite Ratio:    7.33 - 65/34/38
    Words: 79
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 119
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 548



    Description:
       Just a little somethng I wrote in my spare time ...personally its not that good


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    dotsWaitingdots
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    Sitting here
    Counting down
    The seconds
    Until we met

    The breath
    I breathe
    The tears
    I seek

    Begin to pour
    Out of me
    The waiting
    The gain

    To me
    The are
    All the same
    Even though

    All is not
    In my control
    Im here
    Wishing

    For only
    One second
    Of your time
    Even though

    I know
    Youll never be
    Quite mine





    Submitted on 2008-02-04 19:51:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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