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    dots Submission Name: Britney Watchdots
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    Author: azurwarrior
    ASL Info:    44/m/SoCal
    Elite Ratio:    5.03 - 86/85/63
    Words: 76
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 842
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 471



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       The latest news...The title is a take off on Baywatch for sarcastic reasons, natch.


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    dotsBritney Watchdots
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    there's the flash of bare ass cheek sans underwear.
    she stands screaming because she got a flat tire.
    she took her small sons and wouldn't relinquish them despite a court order.
    over a dozen police in cars, motorcycles and even a helicopter
    escort this lone young woman before dawn,
    to the booby hatch, while the entire world is watching.
    and while Britney probably feels she is being watched-
    and is right.




    Submitted on 2008-02-04 20:35:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I think she ought to have a pepper spray and every chance she gets, spray her mom with it. And I don't even care about celebritities! But I guess this one attracts sympathy, eh?
    | Posted on 2008-02-04 00:00:00 | by Glen Bowman | [ Reply to This ]


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