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Author: MC white
ASL Info:    20/Male/Ohio
Elite Ratio:    3.26 - 71 /73 /45
Words: 80
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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A lap dance, A lover
the dim light, another
late night
her dress tight
I wonder, above her
The smoke on the ceiling
and in me, I'm feeling
I'm lifted and drifting
her dress, I've been peeling
and shes free
and shes down on her knees
and I'm back in the moment
where she wants me to be
so I move her, and through her
I wish that I knew her
by morning or sooner
I'll be gone

Submitted on 2008-02-04 21:51:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I like this poem it has such a natural rhythem to it and tells a complete story with a shorter poem. I also really like the description of the smoke. Great Right keep on writing

| Posted on 2008-02-05 00:00:00 | by Selene | [ Reply to This ]

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