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    dots Submission Name: Am I Getting Drunk?dots
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    Author: Jester_Gesture
    ASL Info:    19/f/WA
    Elite Ratio:    3.44 - 353/428/182
    Words: 160
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 101
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 1132



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    dotsAm I Getting Drunk?dots
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    Exhausted orbs blue-ing with sadness
    eye the liquid yellowed gray inside
    the bottle.
    And she asks herself
    Am I getting drunk? And little piano keys
    are making their way up her arms,
    doing a little piano dance into her ears.
    The notes soften her sharp edges
    and loosen her in-tense-tions whether
    or not
    they were good.
    It tastes good.

    Typing digits waver and suspended memories
    sway in blinking eyes green-ing with
    dizzy little envy monsters causing
    eyelids to do a little free fall.
    She asks the bottle
    Am I getting drunk?
    She takes a long drive to the desk,
    drives back with the bottle in hand,
    giving it a slow, deliberate kiss.

    There are acoustic guitar strings
    whispering across her skin.
    Sounds ravishing, said the bottle,
    and the music took a hint
    and ravaged her
    on the desk
    in the endless midnight.
    And afterwards, she waits some more,
    and wants some more,
    whether
    or not
    it was good.




    Submitted on 2008-02-05 02:45:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This was awesome! I favorited it, no doubt...
    (I know that's not a word, but I don't care.)
    Speaking of not words- that was what really sold me on this one. Not just the title and subject and the picture-perfect descriptions of the boozing but also the blue-ing and the green-ing and the in-tense-tions... Made it all so unique and just such a pleasure to read. Fresh air, for sure!
    -Ceyx
    | Posted on 2008-03-04 00:00:00 | by Ceyx | [ Reply to This ]


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