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    Author: justkillme08
    ASL Info:    18/F/MA
    Elite Ratio:    1.63 - 97/170/124
    Words: 144
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 676
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 819



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       this goes to my babi that i love so much.
    january 31st, 2008


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    You really donít know
    How much you mean to me
    Iíd do anything for you
    Just to see you happy
    You make me smile
    And you make me weak in my knees
    Babe I donít want to lose you
    Youíre too good to me
    I aint ever had no one like you
    Who treats me the way you do
    I canít lose you
    No way
    No how
    Your mine can you see
    And Iím yours
    Maybe just maybe
    Weíre meant to be
    You know you make me scared
    To tell you exactly how I feel
    I like you so much
    And I miss you when you're not near
    Iím sorry I donít say certain things
    Nearly enough
    Iím trying my hardest
    Just so you know
    I care a lot about you
    And I donít ever want to let you go.




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