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    dots Submission Name: A golithe problemdots
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    Author: Duke Medhat
    ASL Info:    21/Male/Egypt
    Elite Ratio:    5.08 - 58/38/24
    Words: 57
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 1056
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 326



    Description:
       This was a true relation that started at 10 Nov. 2006 and Ended at 13 Nov.2007

    The most painful relation I had ever suffered

    I wrote this poem when I was still in a relation

    It's over now but I still love her . . .


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    dotsA golithe problemdots
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    Goliath problem, I am in
    Just a colleague!, oh, so what's then
    You are an angle, I admit
    But this view, I can not accept

    Mean naught to you, I can not bear
    Not to win you, is what I fear
    Naught Important, to me, but you
    Can't you see! ... see that I love you!




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