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    dots Submission Name: Poem of Lyricsdots

    Author: Xena
    ASL Info:    17/F/Pluto
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 24/20/22
    Words: 179
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Alone
    Total Views: 614
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       Its just a big poem with lines from a bunch of different songs and bands. I added a few of my own lines and touches to it.

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    dotsPoem of Lyricsdots

    I gotta go my own way

    For what was said

    and what was done

    still lingerers inside my mind

    It seems like every day

    I make more mistakes

    I just can't get it right

    I知 trying to forget that I知 addicted to you

    But somewhere the one I want to be with is with someone else

    I can feel the pressure

    It痴 getting closer now

    How the hell did we wind up like this

    Friendship falling apart

    Just like my heart

    So I have no clue to why I知 waiting on this long lonely road

    I値l never make you mine

    I'm sitting all alone feeling empty

    I知 not okay

    I promise you that

    You wear me out

    Sometimes I cry from all this senseless pleading

    So sick and tired of all this needless beating

    I知 going to become just like a bird

    I only fly away

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