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    Author: Xena
    ASL Info:    17/F/Pluto
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 24/20/22
    Words: 63
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Longing
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    Rainy Clouds hang low
    The Mist is all around me
    The Wind howls far below
    My Heart feels stone cold
    Now that the Sun shall never shine
    Now that the Mist only gets thicker
    Now that the Wind knocks me down
    I know that my Heart will never beat again
    The day I find true Love is the day Hell freezes over




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